Comments on: आँचल में बाँध सिसकी http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/ Veena Vij Udit's writings in Hindi Mon, 21 Nov 2011 13:15:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.1 By: Harish Bhatt http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-3421 Harish Bhatt Fri, 12 Nov 2010 09:50:13 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-3421 थन्क्स् थन्क्स्

]]> By: Udita Bhatia http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-2840 Udita Bhatia Tue, 28 Sep 2010 19:45:48 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-2840 बहुत ही सुन्दर रचना है आपकी , दिल को छू गई है हमारे!!!!! क्या बतायें अपना हाल आपको ? ऍसे ही लिखते रहे आप सदा,ये ख़्वाहिश है हमारी!!!!!!!!!!!!! बहुत ही सुन्दर रचना है आपकी , दिल को छू गई है हमारे!!!!! क्या बतायें अपना हाल आपको ?
ऍसे ही लिखते रहे आप सदा,ये ख़्वाहिश है हमारी!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> By: Usha oberoi http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-1968 Usha oberoi Fri, 23 Jul 2010 01:32:27 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-1968 प्रिय दिद अप्ने भुत अचा .लिखा हए. एसि त्र्ह लिखा करे. प्रिय दिद अप्ने भुत अचा .लिखा हए. एसि त्र्ह लिखा करे.

]]> By: chandra prakash http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-1860 chandra prakash Mon, 05 Jul 2010 10:50:06 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-1860 DEAR VIJ IT IS A NICE PIECE OF WORK IN HINDI.IT WOULD BE FURTHER NICE IF LANGUAGE HAS BEEN LITTLE MORE SIMPLE. PREM CHAND KI SADGI NE JITNA BHALA HINDI KA KIYA HEY, UTNA KLIST SHELLY KO APNA KAR HUM HINDI KA BHALA NAHI KAR PAYE HEN. HINDI KE LIYE SATAT PRYAS KE LIYE DHANYAVAD. CHANDRA PRAKASH EK AAM AADMI DEAR VIJ

IT IS A NICE PIECE OF WORK IN HINDI.IT WOULD BE FURTHER NICE

IF LANGUAGE HAS BEEN LITTLE MORE SIMPLE.

PREM CHAND KI SADGI NE JITNA BHALA HINDI KA KIYA HEY, UTNA KLIST SHELLY KO APNA KAR HUM HINDI KA BHALA NAHI KAR PAYE HEN.

HINDI KE LIYE SATAT PRYAS KE LIYE DHANYAVAD.

CHANDRA PRAKASH

EK AAM AADMI

]]> By: surya http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-1254 surya Thu, 28 Jan 2010 16:48:43 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-1254 अति सुन्दर् अति सुन्दर्

]]> By: Sundar http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-1177 Sundar Sun, 03 Jan 2010 08:33:37 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-1177 अति सुन्दर! अति सुन्दर!

]]> By: om arya http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-1077 om arya Thu, 29 Oct 2009 09:30:41 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-1077 बहुत हि गहराई है आपकी रचना के भाव के हर एक पंक्ति मे ...................सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति ! बहुत हि गहराई है आपकी रचना के भाव के हर एक पंक्ति मे ……………….सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति !

]]> By: परमजीत बाली http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-1076 परमजीत बाली Thu, 29 Oct 2009 05:48:00 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-1076 बहुत सुन्दर रचना है।बधाई। पल-पल हर पल कुढ़-कुढ़ जीना तंग आ तुमसे पलायन करना फिर जाना दुनिया में कोई ठौर नहीं तुमसे बँधी तो तुम बिन कोई और नहीं ! बहुत सुन्दर रचना है।बधाई।

पल-पल हर पल कुढ़-कुढ़ जीना
तंग आ तुमसे पलायन करना
फिर जाना दुनिया में कोई ठौर नहीं
तुमसे बँधी तो तुम बिन कोई और नहीं !

]]> By: M Verma http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/comment-page-1/#comment-1074 M Verma Wed, 28 Oct 2009 23:24:12 +0000 http://www.veenavij.com/%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%9a%e0%a4%b2-%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%87%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81%e0%a4%a7-%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%b8%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/#comment-1074 रुके-रुके शबनम के क़तरे ज़हन को चीरते बन मल्हार! बहुत सुन्दर रुके-रुके शबनम के क़तरे
ज़हन को चीरते बन मल्हार!

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